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Giraffes are known for their towering height and their long necks. Their favorite meal consists of the tender leaves that grow on the crowns of acacia trees. Giraffes use their height to graze in treetops that few other animals can reach. Thus, one might infer that to be a giraffe is to ascend to lofty heights to attain one’s goal. Yet, I must add that regardless of its height, the giraffe cannot accomplish its goal and grasp the choicest morsels without extending its neck. Therefore, I conclude, metaphorically speaking, that to be a giraffe is to stick one’s neck out!
Which brings me to Mrs. K’s Blog. No doubt about it, I was sticking my neck out here. Overwhelmed didn’t begin to describe how I felt. The kicking and screaming started right after the meltdown that was preceded by themes, sidebars, widgets, headers, posts, pages, categories, tags, links, plug-ins, media, HTML, URL’s, comments, authors, users, tools, settings, meta, dashboard (for driving me insane!), privacy, avatars, RSS feeds, trackbacks, and pings (no pong). How could I ever master the blog’s technology to the point where I could teach my students?
A blog is a tool. A TOOL!!! It is NOT about teaching the tool. It is about allowing teachers to integrate all subject areas (if desired) by addressing multiple skills and literacies. … I fear that teachers might give up too early on classroom or student blogs before the initial learning curve for teachers AND students has been overcome. http://langwitches.org/blog/2010/03/06/taking-student-blogging-to-the-next-level/
How true! So, how committed to creating a classroom learning community was I? Was I up to the challenge of setting the bar to what a classroom blog could be? If not, what was the point of sticking my neck out? If not, how could I convince my colleagues to do the same? Kicking and screaming, I determined that Mrs. K’s Blog would become the first classroom blog for middle school language arts. Whatever the learning curve was, my students and I would overcome it together.
We spent the first few weeks learning the basics and deciding what our blog should be. This involved reading other classroom blogs, and taking note of writing and commenting etiquette (of which there was little to be found). Though this was a collaborative effort, I set the guidelines re: content and quality. First and foremost, I made it very clear that we were creating and maintaining an academic blog, not social networking. Once the distinction was understood, the students prepared a list of what they considered to be acceptable “netiquette”. Included was the importance of using good writing practices.
Commenting was a lesson unto itself. All of us concurred that the primary purpose of our blog was to communicate; however, we were not in agreement about what “communicate” meant. Most students viewed communication and telling as synonymous. They seemed baffled by the concept that blogs are conversational; that their [the students'] comments should prompt, in turn, others to respond – to which the students could then reply, etc. Though I compared the process to texting, instant messaging, chatting and the like, I reiterated that in this context, only academic comments were appropriate. Textspeak and social comments, like “luved it” or “:-)”, were unacceptable because 1) they don’t reveal what the reader is thinking, and 2) social comments don’t stimulate conversation. We concluded that an academic comment should:
- Acknowledge the author of the blog post;
- Politely let the author know why you agree or disagree with him/her;
- Encourage dialogue by offering a different perspective or by expanding on the author’s point-of-view;
- Be coherent, content appropriate, and grammatically correct;
- Critique, not criticize; be respectful of others’ feelings. (i.e., Don’t write anything you would be ashamed to say to someone’s face.
We were ready. We were on-line, we had our name and our theme. I felt it important that, initially, I guide the academic commenting. I reviewed remarks and we discussed them as a class; however, I made all final publishing decisions (editorial privilege).
As it has been my experience that young adolescents have opinions about everything, I figured that any controversial topic/current event would provoke the type of conversation that would make for interesting commenting. Currently, as it so happened, we just had been discussing an unfortunate Sea World incident that resulted in the death of a trainer. Since the students were familiar with the scenario, I wrote an editorial blog post titled “Do Killer Whales Belong in Captivity?” I was thrilled with the results. The students’ comments were contextual and well-written. I had previously shared with them a list of comment starters. (from Langwitches - from Youth Radio blog Netiquette – which in turn was adapted from Excellence and Imagination) One of the requirements for this first assignment, was that in addition to commenting on my post, students had to read and respond to each others’ comments, as well. When I saw students’ replies with “@” in front of user names, I knew they had exceeded expectations – mine and theirs. 


The best was yet to come. We received responses from readers outside our classroom community. When revelation dawned, when my students first became aware that the world at large could and did read what they wrote, and that what they had to say was worthy of authentic comment … it was truly wonderful to behold. I live for moments like these – moments when learning is life-changing – moments when self-confidence and pride in accomplishment are palpable – moments that are sure to lead to other such moments.
But, first, I had to be a giraffe.
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Tags: 21st_Century_Learning, Blogging, Commenting, Language_Arts, Middle_School, Student_blogs, Technology
What An Impact A Post Makes…
11 JanLast year, the Jewish Museum of Florida sponsored a state-wide essay contest, “A Military Portrait”, to complement a new exhibit, “Florida Jews in the Military”. The exhibit explored “the sacrifices and accomplishments of Florida’s Jews in every conflict from the Seminole Wars to the World Wars, Korea, Vietnam, the Persian Gulf and the battles of the 21st century.” The writing contest was open to all middle school and high school students in Florida, the essays to focus on the accomplishments of someone they knew or had researched who had served in the military.
The writing contest seemed tailor-made for my 7th grade language arts class, encompassing research skills, interviewing, expository writing, personal narration and reflection. Every student in the class participated, and I submitted the best essays to the Jewish Museum of Florida for judging. Rachel, one of my 7th grade students, wrote about a fallen soldier, Major Stuart A. Wolfer, killed during a rocket attack in Iraq. Her essay placed 3rd in the state. She traveled to Miami to accept her award, and while attending the reception at the museum, she happened to meet a soldier who was with Major Wolfer when he died. It was a once-in-a-lifetime experience, and when she returned home, I asked her to blog about her trip.
I have always encouraged my students to embrace the power in words, and sharing increases that word power exponentially. There is a certain vulnerability in sharing your writing on a blog. It’s not easy to put yourself out there for the world to read; as a relatively new blogger myself, I spend countless hours editing and re-editing before I have the courage to publish. How, then, should I motivate my students to take the risk and blog? I knew they would be inspired if they could experience the impact that just one post can make. So, I shared Rachel’s story, hoping that it would merit some thoughtful comments, and the amazing happened. The family and friends of the fallen soldier, having received Google alerts re: Rachel’s post, made contact with her via our blog. And, like a stone skipping on the water, the ripple effect began.
Coincidentally, I found out about the museum’s writing contest as we were evaluating 7th grade projects for the Day School’s biennial Jewish History Fair. The essays became springboards for power-point presentations about the veterans each student chose to honor. The power-points, having been looped, were continuously projected on a large screen. The American flag and Israeli flag, and a poster display explaining the project flanked the screen. A small viewing gallery of chairs completed the set-up. As Fair visitors filed past, it was heartening to see how many took a seat and stayed awhile. The slides were powerful, bringing tears to some eyes, inspiring hushed and respectful conversation, continually drawing others to the exhibit. I observed my students answering questions and engaging guests in conversation, pride in their accomplishments evident.
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The ripple grew as Silvia Tolisano, Langwitches, referred to Rachel’s essay in her blog post “What Have You Got To Lose?”. And continues still…
Recently, I had the pleasure of being asked by Rachel, now an 8th grader, to critique an essay she wrote as a requisite for acceptance to a high school honors/IB program. It is a good essay – reflective, self-confident; written in her own voice, it captures her hopefulness and enthusiasm. She wants to be a writer, to quote “an extraordinary writer”, and she believes she will. She cites her experience writing an award-winning essay, a life-changing experience when she shared it on our classroom blog. What an impact a post makes…
Tags: 21st_Century_Learning, Blogging, Commenting, Language_Arts, Middle_School, Technology